Speech correction

Ladies and gentlemen- and Miss Fazlin.
A good afternoon to all those present. Allow me to cut to the chase.
Reports of any and every star doing anything and everything are plastered all over the media. Whether good or bad, they do influence us, especially the youth of today. I stand here today to discuss with you an issue that has troubled me greatly. It is the fact that more and more of our impressionable youth are being swayed towards ruin by their ‘Role Models’-Celebrities…

Celebrities cause a negative impact on our young generation. Just a few months ago, a famous celebrity starlet got into trouble for drink driving and almost killing an innocent pedestrian. She was sentenced to a mere two weeks in prison, a woefully short period of time. However, after serving a measly short period of two days in jail, she was released and immediately returned to her previous party girl life. She and countless other celebrities are people are polluting the minds of the innocent young these days.

Celebrities do not consider the fact that even though they are well-known, they would be arrested when they break the law. It is well known that most, if not all celebrities are party animals, fettering their obscene amount of money away on parties and alcohol. Their attitudes to the ordinary man on the street are horrible, as they feel that, being famous; they have the right to do anything they want, even if it was against the law, as well as wanting every single person to worship them like gods. Said another celebrity when she took a man’s car to chase after her ex-personal secretary” I’m a celebrity, I can’t get arrested.” Even though she is a celebrity, she have no right to take people property as hers and also there is no law stating that celebrities would not be arrested if they do something wrong.

Thus, this is why I feel that celebrities are not good role models for the world youth of today. And strict censures should be put on media containing questionable material and characters to protect the minds of today’s youth form being led astray from their bad influences.
Once again, thank you for coming.

Conclusion

Role models- drunk celebrities, hardly a good impression at all. Yes, celebrities are cool, they receive all the attention and are usually stunningly pretty or handsome. They have everything you want, they are celebrities not normal commoners. Commoners who are happy with just a autograph from your idol. Celabrities such as Paris Hilton, Britney Spears and Lindsay Lohan had experienced jail life before. I agree that they lead glamorous life but these behavior, attitude, and their "ability" to spend money like flowing water. I believe that no one would want their family member to behave like them - getting caught umpteen times for drink driving, abusive reactions to people you do not like or spending all your money? Thus, I believe that celebrities are not good role models and they should not be seen as one.With that I shall end my speech.Thank You.

Celebrities should not be seen as a good role model

Ladies and gentlemen of the audience,
Reports of superstar's movement all over the media. Whether good or bad, they do cause influences on us. I stand here today to discuss with you an issue that has troubled us all greatly. It is the fact that more and more of our impressionable youth are being swayed towards ruin by their‘Role Models’-Celebrities…

Celebrities cause a negative impact on our young generations. Few months ago, a famous celebrity starlet,got into trouble for drink driving and almost killing an innocent pedestrian. She was sentenced to a mere two weeks in prison, a woefully short period of time. However, after serving a measly short period of two days in jail, she was released and immediately returned to her previous party girl life. She and countless other celebrities are people are polluting the minds of the innocent young these days.

Celebrities do not consider the fact that even though they are well-known, they would be arrested when they break the law. It is already well known that most, if not all celebrities are party animals, fettering their obscene amount of money away on parties and alcohol. Their attitudes to the ordinary man on the street are horrible. Said another celebrity when she took a man’s car”I’m a celebrity, I can’t get arrested.”Even though she is a celebritiy,she have no right to take people property as hers and also there is no law stating that celebrities would not be arrested if they do something wrong.


Thus, this is why I feel that celebrities are not good role models for the world youth of today. And strict censures should be put on films with them inside to protect the minds of today’s youth form being led astray form their bad influences.
Thank you.

Group 6 eidited version

Abortion, like all surgical procedures,carry a risk,like a perforated uterus,bowel or bladder,and sterility and even death. Mothers may not even be able to conceive again.The mothers would also feel guilt and remorse after the operation.Due to these strong negative emotions and feelings, it will lead to depression and if not treated, may lead to serious cases in which the distraught mothers commit suicide.

Alsoafter having the abortion, it is expected for the mothers to have bleeding and cramps.Some symptoms may show up too. For example,dizziness, nauseous and strong cramps temporary mild fever or pains. Though these symptoms can be reduced, they are unavoidable.Sometimes,incomplete abortion may happen.This will happen if the embryo and other parts of the fetous are not entirely removed from the mother's womb.After undergoing the medical procedure,mothers may die if allergic reaction,infection , very heavy bleeding or undetected ectopic pregnancy are left untreated.The mothers may not be able to conceive again as well since part of their uterus may be damaged during abortion procedures.

Abortion (new version)

Good evening, ladies and gentlemen.

How often have you seen a new life being destroyed before it even started? How often do you see an unborn child, incapable of doing anything, die a death that should never be experienced by anybody? Therefore, my presence here today is to tell you why abortion should never have been legalized.

Firstly, abortion regardless on purpose or of medical reasons, can be considered as murder. It not only has a negative impact on the mothers but also on the country. Birth rates will decrease rapidly resulting in insufficient young people to take over the seats of the previous generation.

Many people, not only teenagers, may practice casual sex without thinking for they know that they can use abortion to get rid of unwanted pregnancies. Clinics would be flocked with women for abortion. Would you, distinguished guests, want that to happen? Let people simply end lives so that they can enjoy while others suffer?

Other than that, abortions could also cause defects in future pregnancies. Birth defects, premature birth, low infant birth weight, increased chances of an ectopic pregnancy, miscarriages or even infant death are just some common problems faced.

Worst cases are that women might not be able to conceive again due to the damage done to the womb during the abortion. The pain of yearning for a baby yet powerless to reproduce, no one deserves that kind of torture.

Abortion could also cause death, considering that the risk of death from abortion increases the longer a woman has been pregnant. Sometimes there may even be incomplete abortion.

In other words, the embryo or fetus is not completely removed from the womb; leaving behind other products of conception. This could cause an allergic reaction, an infection, very heavy bleeding, injury to the cervix or blood clots in the uterus.

Have you realized now, ladies and gentlemen? I beg of you to open your eyes and let your hearts see the truth. Abortion is not a soloution, was never a soloution, but a cause of more problems. It is not fair for women to suffer because they turn to abortion just because abortion is legal! Therefore, ladies and gentlemen, my conclusion is that abortion should not have even been legalized.

Extract of 5 words thingy

"Great. Just Great. You got us lost. Nice going Bart," I sneered at him, trying hard not to explode. I could barely contain my anger as I glared into those small, piggy eyes on that round, chubby face that belonged to Bart Shrimpson, who was staring defiantly back, determined not to look away. Bart claimed he knew a shortcut to the campsite at the forest but all he did was led us into the middle of nowhere.

We groped around in the darkness, trying to get out of this dense jungle when we heard a high-pitched laugh. A curvy women, with long, silky hair sashayed beside a man who was wearing a jacket made of leather. He swaggered with his arm around the woman's slim waist, wearing a smug on his face. What could two high-class people be doing here in a jungle? We sneaked behind them, curiosity taking control.

Made by Haziq(PEACE)

Haha,I forgot my words...So i just make it up


The soldier Retreated to safety,firing his Portable machine gun all the way.
"I need a medic!"He yelled.
I sauntered over to him, pulling out my healing syringe,Healing him to full health. He Marched out again,only to be blown up by a stray Panzerfaust round.
I trailed after a Field Ops,Hoping that he would die and give me ammo.
Suddenly,he stumbled and fell,leaving me unprotected as a sniper round found itself buried in my skull...

Abortion speech (1st paragraph)

Ladies and gentlemen,

How often have you seen a new life being destroyed before it even started? How often do you see an unborn child, incapable of doing anything die a death that should never be experienced by anybody? Do you even know the pain that the baby experienced; the mental anguish suffered by the mothers-to-be? Therefore, my presence here is to tell you why abortion should never have been legalised.

Done by: Zhen Yan, Si Qi, Haziq and Kar Yien